He dwells in the heart of the blue sky,
Rising majestically like a king- up above high,
Spreading his velvety warm rays,
Bestowing us with beautiful days,
But he yearns for the one and only,
Spending his hours alone and lonely,
She enters the night sky as he leaves,
Tears rush forth as she grieves,
Their love was cursed, you see,
Together, they were never meant to be,
She waits patiently for his return,
Never- she will never learn,
Oh what a joy it would be to see,
The perfect pair-like a flower and a bee,
Yet, on the forbidden day, they do unite,
Yes, it is an outstanding sight,
But you have been warned-keep this in mind,
If you witness the meeting-you will be left blind.
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nicee! i like it...sad, but still somehow not depressing. oh yeah and yearns - it was just a typo.
cute. :-)
Nice poem, very sad nd song-like, innocent...
nice one! i liked it...
It's almost like I know what you're talking about...but then, do I? Lol...nice :)
you know contrary to other placesw , they are together in australia till 11.am , if i think i know wehat you are talking about
hmmm... i guess i wasn't completely focusing on the scientific aspect. i think i was thinking more about the "poetic-ness" of an eclipse and a full moon, and mostly how a full moon might represent woman. i think its beautiful to think of a woman revealing her personality little by little, just like a moon goes through its own waning/waxing phases. but as far as i know, all phases of the moon can be seen during the day, except for the new moon phase and the full moon phase. i thought that the sun and the moon are in completely opposite positions in the sky...?
i thought you were speaking about the sun and the rain.. her tears grief and things, i thought that was rain.. and then when they unite, i expected a rainbow.. but the blinding confused me.. and then i realized it's moon and not rain! :)
rain fits in all lines except the last!
ohh yea, it does, doesn't it. well, rain doesn't always have to come at night! :)
mm, rainbow would've been goodd!
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