Enchanted

A decree of three words,
happily ever after.
Fused with an ambiance,
of glee and laughter.

After all that passed,
against all who fought.
The time of forever,
appeared too short.

A step taken forward,
faltering of an expression.
A spill of feelings,
it was failed suppression.

A few more graceful strides,
closer to the destination.
What seemed to be very subtle,
was there a hint of hesitation?

A brief reflection on eternity,
sowed the seeds for a misgiving.
Cast doubts on the thoughts,
of how to continue living.

But such worries were petty,
in this fairytale land.
It was to be a beautiful journey,
traveled hand in hand.

A curse of illusions,
was blissful, nothing tragic.
Everything was unseen,
for a minute of magic.

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"Let him know his fairy tale accurately, and have perfect joy or awe in the conception of it as if it were real; thus he will always be exercising his power of grasping realities: but a confused, careless, and discrediting tenure of the fiction will lead to as confused and careless reading of fact. Let the circumstances of both be strictly perceived, and long dwelt upon, and let the child's own mind develop fruit of thought from both. It is of the greatest importance early to secure this habit of contemplation, and therefore it is a grave error, either to multiply unnecessarily, or to illustrate with extravagant richness, the incidents presented to the imagination."

~John Ruskin~

5 thoughts:

sana said...

Beautiful.........

Ranjith said...

finally! :)
very nice... John Ruskin was confusing however..

Zephyr said...

thanks guys! :-)

well, as for ruskin's quote... this is wht i think the gist of it is:

to not let fairy tales lead u away frm the path of reality. its good to understand them to an extent. but if u interpret them wrongly, then it'll veer u away into a world of misconceptions.

altho, i personally think tht sometimes, the world of misconceptions is better than the crappy reality we live in. haha. but i guess striking a perfect balance between fantasy and reality is the key...

in4sight said...

well, u kno im gonna say screw fairy tales and balance n jus try to understand n make the crappy reality better. haha. but very nice poem :)

Zephyr said...

lol, of course u need to work on the crappy reality to make it better.

but i dunno, sometimes, i think u need an escape.

not so much bcuz ur running away frm the reality tht ur living in and r afraid to face it head on, cuz of course, tht would be detrimental too.

but just a escape, for a couple of minutes. to clear ur head or something. so u can come back to face the crappy reality all the more stronger. or saner. haha.

 

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To escape from the humdrum existence people call "life", I explore the jungle of my mind. A meandering path, with thoughts as my obstacles. I put aside the smiling face of my mother, snapshots of holidays with friends, lost memories of my childhood... All in an attempt to find answers to my branching questions.

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